Tuesday, 9 August 2016

Learning Muscle - Revising

Rimu Hub has had a closer look at their Revising learning muscle over the last two weeks. Rimu watched a video about a young boy called Austen and identified the importance of revision and editing.

Take a look:

We noticed that Austen made many drafts each time making improvements from the feedback which was very specific.
Rimu had their own go at revising some poorly written sentences about the Olympics. They corrected spelling, added punctuation and decorated their work to make some great improvements.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Rimu hub we all finished it to our personal best.